Score: 9

"Beautiful"

submission: "Last Man on the Moon"

date: October 17, 2003

That was awesome. The ending came out of nowhere. Very well done. The violence of "1" was for the bowling ball.

Score: 3

"arfenhouse"

submission: Forehead Shavecut

date: October 3, 2003

wow, way to try to be like arfenhouse or arfenhouse too, but fail miserably. get an original idea

Score: 3

"damn it"

submission: Mario in Black

date: September 6, 2003

ok, it started out good, aside from the un-naturally large amount of spelling errors. and what the hell was with peach and toad? what kind of bizarre fantasy world do you live in. can anyone say crap?